What are your thoughts on power interruptions?
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My thoughts power interruptions is scary because the power interruptions is dark so it is scary power interruption in my school four years ago.
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What are your thoughts on power interruptions?
My thoughts power interruptions is scary because the power interruptions is dark so it is scary power interruption in my school four years ago.
>> I think power interruptions are scary because it becomes dark without electricity. For example, there was a power interruption four years ago in my school and I was scared.
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