What are your thoughts on shopaholics?
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I think shopaholic is neither good nor bad because some people when shop feel fun so shopaholic is good.
The bed things is going to spend too much money.
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What are your thoughts on shopaholics?
I think shopaholic is neither good nor bad because some people when shop feel fun so shopaholic is good.
>> I think a shopaholic is neither good nor bad because some people find it fun when they shop.
The bed things is going to spend too much money.
>> The bad thing is spending too much money.
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