What are your thoughts on space tourism?
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I think space tourism is very dangerous because people is not used to.
But, I think spacetourism is very amazing too.
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What are your thoughts on space tourism?
I think space tourism is very dangerous because people is not used to.
>> I think space tourism is very dangerous because people are not used to it.
But, I think spacetourism is very amazing too.
>> But I think it is very amazing, too.
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