What are your thoughts on Stonehenge? What do you think was the purpose of Stonehenge when it was bu
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I think it was made for religious reasons for example It was made to worship God and I think it\'s looks like colosseum.
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What are your thoughts on Stonehenge? What do you think was the purpose of Stonehenge when it was built?
I think it was made for religious reasons for example It was made to worship God and I think it\'s looks like colosseum.
>>> I think it was made for religious reasons—for example, to worship God. Also, I think it looks like the Colosseum.
>>> OR: The structure seems to have a religious purpose, maybe for worshiping God, and its appearance reminds me of the Colosseum.
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