What are your thoughts on tall people becoming basketball players just because of their height advan
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I think it\'snot good because they are maybe dont want a basketball player and they had no choice but to do it because they was tall.
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What are your thoughts on tall people becoming basketball players just because of their height advantage?
I think it\'s not good because they are maybe dont want a basketball player and they had no choice but to do it because they was tall.
>> I think it\'s not good because maybe they don\'t want to be a basketball player and have no choice but to do it because they are tall.
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