What are your thoughts on the disparity in education between the wealthy and the poor in your region
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If this is a reality, I can\'t avoid it. Before I start to complain about it, I want to keep this in my mind; we were born with nothing, we will pass away with nothing. While we are living in a harsh world, the winner can be a person who is satisfied with himself and whose well being is high. Every choice has it pros and cons in education. Wow ~ competative world....For what are we chasing...then?? It\'s very sensitive and complicate for me to talk about this.
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If this is a reality, I can\'t avoid it.
>> If this were a reality, I wouldn\'t be able to avoid it.
Before I start to complain about it, I want to keep this in my mind; we were born with nothing, we will pass away with nothing.
>> Before I start complaining about it, I want to keep this in my mind; we were born with nothing, we will pass away with nothing.
While we are living in a harsh world, the winner can be a person who is satisfied with himself and whose well being is high.
>> or: As long as we are living in a harsh world, the winner would always be a person who is satisfied with himself and whose well being is high.
Every choice has it pros and cons in education. Wow ~ competitive world....For what are we chasing...then??
>> correct
It\'s very sensitive and complicate for me to talk about this.
>> It\'s very sensitive and complicated for me to talk about this.
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