What are your thoughts on the National Assembly in your country?
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I think the National Assembly in the county is Normal because it is on institution representing our my country.
But National Assembly people is not work for my country people.
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What are your thoughts on the National Assembly in your country?
I think the National Assembly in the county is Normal because it is on institution representing our my country.
>> I think the National Assembly is normal because it is an institution representing our country.
But National Assembly people is not work for my country people.
>> But the members of the National Assembly do not do their best for the people.
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