What are your thoughts on the ongoing trade war between Japan and Korea?
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This trade-war between Japan and Korea is not the first, it has been doing for a long time. I hope Japan drawback this situation and two countries reconcile soon. Because trade is quite important among countries.
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This trade-war between Japan and Korea is not the first, it has been doing for a long time.
>> This is not the first time that a trade war between Japan and Korea has occurred. It happened a few times already and it seems that this current one is going to last for quite a long time.
I hope Japan drawback this situation and two countries reconcile soon. Because trade is quite important among countries.
>> I hope that Japan withdraws its trade restrictions and the two countries reconciles soon because trade is vital among countries.
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