What are your thoughts on the politics in your country?
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I think on the politics in my country is very bad because president is in prison But president approval rating is up.
I don\'t understand this situation.
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Jean~~
What are your thoughts on the politics in your country?
I think on the politics in my country is very bad because president is in prison But president approval rating is up.
>> I don\'t like the political situation in my country because even though the president is in prison, he can still have a high approval rating.
I don\'t understand this situation.
>> CORRECT~~
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