What are your thoughts on the safety issues in your city?
학생이 쓴 원문
Whenever I hear or saw the news about crime especially about the woman, I reconsider living alone. Because I don\'t want to be nervous or intimidated when I\'m on my way to home or open the door thinking about someone in my house. Unfortunately, I think it is very hard to down the crime rate sharply.
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Here\'s your corrected composition Liz!
Many thanks for sending it. See you when I see you!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What are your thoughts on the safety issues in your city?
Whenever I hear or saw the news about crime especially about the woman, I reconsider living alone. Because I don\'t want to be nervous or intimidated when I\'m on my way to home or open the door thinking about someone in my house.
>> Whenever I hear or see the news about crime, especially involving women, I reconsider living alone because I don\'t want to be nervous or intimidated when I am on my way home or open the door thinking that someone broke into my house.
Unfortunately, I think it is very hard to down the crime rate sharply.
>> Unfortunately, I think reducing the crime rate sharply would take a lot of effort and manpower.
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