What are your thoughts on vegetarians?
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I think the vegetarian is very hungry because vegetarian are not eat meat and sea food.
So vegetarian is very hard.
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What are your thoughts on vegetarians?
I think the vegetarian is very hungry because vegetarian are not eat meat and sea food.
>> I think vegetarians must be very hungry because they don\'t eat meat and seafood.
So vegetarian is very hard.
>> Therefore, it\'s hard to be a vegetarian.
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