What are your thoughts on white Christmas?
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I think the white Christmas is very beautiful because many snows get off is very cool.
And white Christmas is very rare day So more funny.
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What are your thoughts on white Christmas?
I think the white Christmas is very beautiful because many snows get off is very cool.
>> I think white Christmas is very beautiful because the falling snow looks very cool.
And white Christmas is very rare day So more funny.
>> And white Christmas is a very rare day so it\'s even more fun.
>> OR: It\'s even more fun because white Christmas very rarely happens.
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