what are your weakness in Engilish

2023-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

학생이 쓴 원문

I have studied English for very long years, but, until now I need to learn and keep in mind the word to be used in proper way. Additionally, sometimes I want to use the sensible words for the a proper atmosphere more than the basic words and it is very difficult part toe me. Moreover, I don\'t know how to study this part by myself. The second thing is listening. I tried to practice a listening skill whenever i commute but, i feel that is not enough to improve a listening skill. A few academies that i attended guided me to speak clearly and to know the more word for the listening abilities. Therefore, I may already know I should spend my time and concentrate to practice a speaking and listening. But, believer or not. I don\'t have really enough time .So, this point is also my concern how to practice efficiently.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Sophia! I can see how you mean it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Let us do it together!-Faith-
I have studied English for very long years, but, until now I need to learn and keep in mind the word to be used in proper way.
>> I have studied English for very long years, but until now I need to learn and keep some words in mind to be used in proper ways.
Additionally, sometimes I want to use the sensible words for the a proper atmosphere more than the basic words and it is very difficult part toe me. 
>> Additionally, sometimes I want to use sensible words for a proper atmosphere more than the basic words and it is a very difficult part to me. 
Moreover, I don\'t know how to study this part by myself.
>> CORRECT
OR Moreover, I do not know how to study this part by myself.
The second thing is listening. 
>> CORRECT
OR Second is listening.
I tried to practice a listening skill whenever i commute but, i feel that is not enough to improve a listening skill. 
>> I tried to practice listening skills whenever I commute, but I feel that is not enough to improve. 
A few academies that i attended guided me to speak clearly and to know the more word for the listening abilities. 
>> A few academies that I attended guided me to speak clearly and to know more English words for the listening abilities. 
Therefore, I may already know I should spend my time and concentrate to practice a speaking and listening. 
>> Therefore, I may already know that I should spend my time and concentrate on practicing speaking and listening skills. 
But, believer or not. I don\'t have really enough time .
>> However, believer or not, I do not have really enough time.
So, this point is also my concern how to practice efficiently.
>> Thus, this point is also my concern on how to practice efficiently.

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