What are your weaknesses? Explain in detail.
학생이 쓴 원문
My weaknesses are not enduring in a sleepy state and getting hurt easily. These are very serious and bad for me. I always hope that I can get rid of these weaknesses. However, it is very hard for me as I expected. Because of not enduring in a sleepy state, I\'m hard in a period of preparing exams. And because of getting hurt easily, I don\'t want to listen to bad words. So, I try not to use bad words. Of course it is hard, but if I use bad words, I am going to listen to bad words.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly!
Don\'t worry. You will overcome those weaknesses eventually. Just take one step at a time. :)
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon
My weaknesses are not enduring in a sleepy state and getting hurt easily.
>>My weaknesses are not enduring my sleeping state and getting hurt easily.
These are very serious and bad for me.
>> CORRECT
I always hope that I can get rid of these weaknesses.
>> CORRECT
However, it is very hard for me as I expected.
>> CORRECT
Because of not enduring in a sleepy state, I\'m hard in a period of preparing exams.
>>If I don\'t endure my sleeping state, I get a hard time preparing for my exams.
And because of getting hurt easily, I don\'t want to listen to bad words.
>> I don\'t like listening to bad words being said to me because I get hurt easily.
So, I try not to use bad words.
>> CORRECT
Of course it is hard, but if I use bad words, I am going to listen to bad words.
>> Of course it is hard, but if I use bad words, it will come back to me.
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