What are your weaknesses? Explain in detail.

2022-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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My only weakness is I don\'t have confidence and conviction about my choices. If I should make a choice for something, then, I am nervous about it and afraid of it. Sometimes I regret my choices, and I get huge amounts of stress. And also I don\'t have confidence about myself. Sometimes I think everybody in this world is better than me. But I think it is also the way to grow more maturely.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

You can conquer everything with confidence so you should learn how to have one. You have a lot of great traits that you should be proud of. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon

My only weakness is I don\'t have confidence and conviction about my choices.

>> CORRRECT

If I should make a choice for something, then, I am nervous about it and afraid of it.

>> If I should make a choice for something, I get nervous and afraid.

Sometimes I regret my choices, and I get huge amounts of stress.

>> Sometimes I regret my choices and get a lot of stress over it.

And also I don\'t have confidence about myself.

>> Also, I don\'t have confidence about myself.

Sometimes I think everybody in this world is better than me.

>>Sometimes I think that everybody in this world is better than me.

But I think it is also the way to grow more maturely.
>> But I think it is also a way for me to grow more maturely.

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