What are your wishes for 2016?

2016-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Before talking about my 2016 wishes or plans, let me try to remember what my resolutions were in 2015. People typically make resolutions when a new year begins such as hitting the gym to lose weight, studying a foreign language, getting a job, or getting promoted.I was one on those people in 2015 and set up a few resolutions such as being more generous, embracing others’ faults, seeking a job abroad, trying to change my career, etc. However, I have failed to get tangible results and now feel a bit disappointed at myself. My resolutions were not specific enough. I neither had firm determination or tenacity to achieve the goals.I have my wished for 2016.I want to keep trying to seek an opportunity to work abroad or challenge a new job here.The most important thing is to take care of my health because my body is exhibiting various systems as I’m getting older. In order to realize my wishes, I think that getting started is the first step even if I don’t have detailed plans.

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday, Sir [이름]!

Thanks for sharing what were your plans before and your wishes this year.

I hope that you will be able to reach those.

Be positive and we should always do our best in everything we do in order for us not to regret in the end.

I wish that you will always have good health and you will be more successful this year.

See you in class.

Teacher Nina


Before talking about my 2016 wishes or plans, let me try to remember what my resolutions were in 2015.

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People typically make resolutions when a new year begins such as hitting the gym to lose weight, studying a foreign language, getting a job, or getting promoted.

>> correct

I was one on those people in 2015 and set up a few resolutions such as being more generous, embracing others’ faults, seeking a job abroad, trying to change my career, etc.

>> correct

However, I have failed to get tangible results and now feel a bit disappointed at myself.

>> correct

My resolutions were not specific enough.

>> correct

I neither had firm determination or tenacity to achieve the goals.

>> correct

I have my wished for 2016.

>> Did you mean: I have my wishes for 2016.

I want to keep trying to seek an opportunity to work abroad or challenge a new job here.

>> correct

The most important thing is to take care of my health because my body is exhibiting various systems as I’m getting older.

>> correct

In order to realize my wishes, I think that getting started is the first step even if I don’t have detailed plans.

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