What area of fashion interests you most - clothes, hair, cosmetics, shoes, accessories, etc?

Hi Miss [이름]!

Thank you for sending this in. I think that your boyfriend is a big influence in terms of your fashion style. I hope that you are comfortable wearing a skirt. Anyway, kindly go over my corrections please. Take care and see you in class.

~t. Kelly^^

Actually, I\'m less interested in fashion although I am a woman.

>> Correct.

But, every thing has exception and I\'m belong to the one.

>> But, there\'s an exception in everything and I\'m one of  those exceptions.

Since I had done tae[이름]do, a Korean\'s martial arts, unlike other girls, I had been accustomed to wearing a tae[이름]do uniform, not skirt.

>>Since I had done tae[이름]do, a Korean\'s martial art, unlike other girls, I had been accustomed to wearing a tae[이름]do uniform, not skirt.
since I met my boyfriend, I began to be interested in fashion or cosmetics.

>> Since I met my boyfriend, I began to be interested in fashion or cosmetics.

These days, I wear skirt more often although I wear it just when I meet my boyfriend.

>> These days, I wear skirt more often although I wear I only when I meet my boyfriend.

But I\'m still not interested in accessries or bag.

>> But I\'m still not interested in accessories or bags.

>> But still, I\'m still not interested in accessories or bags.

I think that wearing skirt itself is a big change for me.

>> I think that wearing a skirt is a big change for me.
Though, it is my hair that I have cared about since I was young.

>> Correct.

This is because I have silky hair.

>> Correct.

So I have been trying not to be lifeless hair.

>> So I have been trying not to have a lifeless hair.  

I rarely perm and dye.

>> I rarely perm and dye my hair.

In addition, I use hair essence and hair drier with a cold wind.

>> In addition, I use hair essence and hair drier for my hair.

These efforts make my hair get nicer.

>>These efforts make my hair gets nicer. 

From now on, I\'ll do my best to keep my hair silky.

>> Correct.