What area of fassion interests you most?

2017-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I'm interesting in clothes and shoes. I'm really enjoy going to shopping to buy clothes when I hang out with my friends, my mother, or alone. Firstly, whenever I go to shoping, I really care about colors because I have dark skin, so I usually choose black, grey, and red colors. Then I scan design of the clothes. In addition, I can't sleep if I find bonzer clothes which I want to buy. One day, I just browsed clothes as intended otherwise and when I passed any store, I saw clothes which I concerned. However, I didn't buy it and can't get the clothes off my mind, so I went there again and bought that the next day. I'm also enjoy collecting shoes. Specially, I like to buy and gather running shoes because my major is about sports. In situation of choosing shoes, first, I check wether it is comfortable or not. After that,I check design of the shoes. If it isn't included both of qulifications, I don't buy it. In conclusion, I have interests in area of clothes and shoes.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sending this in. Hmmm... now I wonder how many pairs of running shoes you have. kkk. Happy collecting!^^

~Kelly^^

I\'m interesting in clothes and shoes.

>> I\'m interested in clothes and shoes.
I\'m really enjoy going to shopping to buy clothes when I hang out with my friends, my mother, or alone.

>> I really enjoy shopping for clothes alone or when I hang out with my friends and my mother. 

Firstly, whenever I go to shoping, I really care about colors because I have dark skin, so I usually choose black, grey, and red colors.

>> Firstly, whenever I go shopping, I really care about the colors of the clothes I buy because I have dark skin, so I usually choose black, grey, and red.

Then I scan design of the clothes.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> Then I check the design of the clothes.

In addition, I can\'t sleep if I find bonzer clothes which I want to buy.

>> Correct.

One day, I just browsed clothes as intended otherwise and when I passed any store, I saw clothes which I concerned.

>> Did you mean: One time, when I went window shopping and passed by a store, I saw the clothes that I like.

However, I didn\'t buy it and can\'t get the clothes off my mind, so I went there again and bought that the next day.

>> However, I didn\'t buy it and couldn\'t get the clothes off my mind, so I went there again and bought it the next day.
I\'m also enjoy collecting shoes.

>> I also enjoy collecting shoes.

Specially, I like to buy and gather running shoes because my major is about sports.

>> I especially like to buy and gather running shoes because my major is related to sports.

In situation of choosing shoes, first, I check wether it is comfortable or not.

>> In terms of choosing the right shoes, I first check whether it is comfortable or not.

After that, I check design of the shoes.

>> Correct.

If it isn\'t included both of qulifications, I don\'t buy it.

>> If it doesn\'t pass my criteria, then I don\'t buy it.
In conclusion, I have interests in area of clothes and shoes.

>> In conclusion, I have interests clothes and shoes.

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