What aspects of life in the city would you complain about?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like the life of in the city. City life is convenient. On the other hand we need a fresh air and green spot in the city cause there are many cars, buildings and many people.
We cannot find a wide green park in the city.
I always long for country life.
강사 첨삭
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>>I don\'t like the life in the city.
City life is convenient.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The city life is convenient.
On the other hand we need a fresh air and green spot in the city cause there are many cars, buildings and many people.
>>On the other hand, we need fresh air and green spots in the city cause there are many cars, buildings, and many people.
We cannot find a wide green park in the city.
>>CORRECT
I always long for country life.
>>CORRECT
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