What aspects of life in the city would you complain about?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hello there! This is [Name].
I listened a my lesson\'s recording.
And i try took dictation your talk.
Happy hump day! So how was your day? It\'s just ordinary day. What do you feel happy today?
You should be very happy. Take dictation is funny. Thank you.
Homework: What aspects of life in the city would you complain about?
Life in city happen a Traffic congestion, a lot of incident, etc. I like the countryside. Because I\'m a country boy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony! Yes, I think it\'s good if you listen to the recordings again after your lesson. It will help you a lot.
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>Life in the city has a traffic congestion, a lot of incidents, and etc.
I like the countryside.
>>CORRECT
Because I\'m a country boy.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I like the countryside because I\'m a country boy.
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