What aspects of your city would you complain about?
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I live in Seoul, South Korea.
Seoul is a very beautiful city.
But to complain about aspects of my city is a lot of traffic.
Seoul has a lot of people and car... So Korean\'s say Seoul driving must have perfect driving skills. Especially, On weekend I think use public transport better than car.. haha
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Hello Angela, thank you for sharing this!
Traffic is already part of our system. Can you imagine my city? it\'s just a small city but traffic is terrible especially on weekends.
Greta day ahead!
Aki~
I live in Seoul, South Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
Seoul is a very beautiful city.
>>> CORRECT!
But to complain about aspects of my city is a lot of traffic.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> There is only one thing that I complain about my city, there\'s a lot of traffic.
Seoul has a lot of people and car...
>>> CORRECT!
So Korean\'s say Seoul driving must have perfect driving skills.
>>>So Koreans say that driving in Seoul requires perfect driving skills.
Especially, On weekend I think use public transport better than car.. haha
>>> Especially, on weekends I think using public transport better than car
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