What bad habits bother you the most?

2021-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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I have a habit of sleeping late. I do a cellphon in the bed, and turn on the TV at the same time even if I\'m not watching it. When I go to bed late, I\'m very tired the next day, but it\'s hard to change the lifestyle. I want to change my habit of sleeping late for my health someday.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for the composition. See you on Wednesday!
~~Teacher Kate

I have a habit of sleeping late.
>>CORRECT! 
I do a cellphon in the bed, and turn on the TV at the same time even if I\'m not watching it.
>>I play with my cellphone on the bed and watch TV at the same time even if I\'m not really watching.
When I go to bed late, I\'m very tired the next day, but it\'s hard to change the lifestyle.
>>CORRECT!
I want to change my habit of sleeping late for my health someday.
>>CORRECT! 

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