What birthday traditions are unique to your culture?

2023-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Mika

학생이 쓴 원문

You know, there\'s a tradion that is a birth punch in my country. During my birthday, my friends used to give me presents. And then, they tried to punch me. Hahaha it\'s a tradition among men. But now, they don\'t have strength to do it.

강사 첨삭

Wonder Wednesday to you, Elic! You are smarter than you think; stronger than you can ever imagine, all you need is to go for that dream. Start today and you will reach the destination.

You know, there\'s a tradion that is a birth punch in my country.
>>> You know, there\'s a birth punch tradition in my country.

 

During my birthday, my friends used to give me presents.

>>> On my birthday, my friends used to give me presents.


And then, they tried to punch me.

>>> And after giving their presents, they will try to punch me.


Hahaha it\'s a tradition among men.

>>> It\'s considered to be a tradition among men.


But now, they don\'t have strength to do it.

>>> But nowadays, Korean men tend not to do it anymore.

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