What book nothing to do?
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you have nothing to do? Then, read a book! What? You don\'t know any good books to read?
Then, l recommend \"Harry potter\", Harry Potter is my favorite book. It is a best seller! I recommend this book because of 3reasons.
First, Harry Potter is a very creative book. It is about magic and friendship. It is fun and interesting because it is so creative. Second , this book boosts your imagination. Harry potter is a very detailed book. So, you can imagine the pictures and scenes in your head! You can imagine everyting in the story.
You simply can imagine even if you don\'t want to. Third., this book is for everybody. Not only for adults, not only for children but for everybody. If my friend is student, he or she could read it. If l get older and older and my friend wants a good book ,l could recommend it any time . It doesn\'t matter if you are old or young. Now do you understand why l recommend this book ?
강사 첨삭
Hello, Rose! Thank you for sending this in. I love the Harry Potter series as well. Yeah, it is definitely a good read.
T. Matt
Do you have nothing to do?
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Then, read a book!
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What? You don\'t know any good books to read?
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Then, l recommend \"Harry potter\", Harry Potter is my favorite book.
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>> Then, l recommend \"Harry Potter\", my favorite book.
It is a best seller!
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I recommend this book because of 3 reasons.
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First, Harry Potter is a very creative book.
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It is about magic and friendship.
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It is fun and interesting because it is so creative.
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Second , this book boosts your imagination.
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Harry potter is a very detailed book.
>>Correct
>> Harry Potter is a very detailed book.
So, you can imagine the pictures and scenes in your head!
>>Correct
You can imagine everyting in the story.
>>You can imagine everything in the story.
You simply can imagine even if you don\'t want to.
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>> You can simply imagine even if you don\'t want to.
Third., this book is for everybody.
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Not only for adults, not only for children but for everybody.
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>> It is not just for children and adults but for everyone!
If my friend is student, he or she could read it.
>>Correct
If l get older and older and my friend wants a good book ,l could recommend it any time.
>>Correct
>>If I grow older and my friend wants a good book to read,l could recommend it any time.
It doesn\'t matter if you are old or young.
>>Correct
Now do you understand why l recommend this book ?
>>Correct
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