What c[이름]ges would you like to see in your country\'s educational system? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to see c[이름]ges for national college entrance exam in our country education.
Because it is only one c[이름]ce to show our intelligence.
We have studied for it about 12 years.
But, If we don\'t have a good condition for that day, we would be so embrassed of it.
It is also part of studying to make a good condition, but I don\'t like this system.
강사 첨삭
Hello Nicole,
T[이름]k you for submitting your composition. You are doing well. Keep it up!
~ T. Demi ^^
I want to see c[이름]ges for national college entrance exam in our country education.
>>I want to see c[이름]ges to the national college entrance exam in our country\'s education system.
Because it is only one c[이름]ce to show our intelligence.
>> It is only one c[이름]ce to demonstrate our intelligence.
We have studied for it about 12 years.
>> We have studied for it for about 12 years.
But, If we don\'t have a good condition for that day, we would be so embrassed of it.
>> However, if we are not in good condition on that day, we might feel very embarrassed.
It is also part of studying to make a good condition, but I don\'t like this system.
>> While preparing ourselves to be in good condition is part of studying, I still dislike this system.
T[이름]k you for submitting your composition. You are doing well. Keep it up!
~ T. Demi ^^
I want to see c[이름]ges for national college entrance exam in our country education.
>>I want to see c[이름]ges to the national college entrance exam in our country\'s education system.
Because it is only one c[이름]ce to show our intelligence.
>> It is only one c[이름]ce to demonstrate our intelligence.
We have studied for it about 12 years.
>> We have studied for it for about 12 years.
But, If we don\'t have a good condition for that day, we would be so embrassed of it.
>> However, if we are not in good condition on that day, we might feel very embarrassed.
It is also part of studying to make a good condition, but I don\'t like this system.
>> While preparing ourselves to be in good condition is part of studying, I still dislike this system.
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