What can be a good career when you are 60 years old and above? Share your answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
Becoming a landlord can be an excellent career when my age is over 60 because the physical ability won’t work as much as i do now. Also, I want the rest of my life to be comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Judy!
Living a comfortable is a chance denayed to many. It may be because of the choices we make. Thus, I hope that both of us become landlords so that our lives can be more comfotable as we age.
Thank you for this very good answer. See you later.
-T. Donna =)
Becoming a landlord can be an excellent career when my age is over 60 because the physical ability won’t work as much as i do now.
>> Correct!
Or: I
Also, I want the rest of my life to be comfortable.
>> Correct!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.