What can be done to improve the services in your public library?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m satisfied library system near my home.
Our library is large not like public library .
There are not a lot of books .
Even though I\'m satisfied because there are books what I want to read.
And the library has on-line system.
For example, on-line book finder and when I postpone the return date, I use it often.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you for this. I\'ve never been to a public library in my city. This makes me wonder what kind of facilities or system they have there.
- T. Beth
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I\'m satisfied library system near my home.>>> I\'m satisfied with the system in the library near my home.
Our library is large not like public library .
Our library is large not like public library .
>>> Our library is large not like other public libraries.
There are not a lot of books .
>>> correct
Even though I\'m satisfied because there are books what I want to read.
Even though I\'m satisfied because there are books what I want to read.
>>> Despite that, I am satisfied because it has the books that I want to read.
And the library has on-line system.
And the library has on-line system.
>>> correct
For example, on-line book finder and when I postpone the return date, I use it often.
For example, on-line book finder and when I postpone the return date, I use it often.
>>> correct
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