What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
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What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
First, to reduce the dangers of global warming, we could walk in a walking distance than riding cars or we could ride bikes.
Next I will think about it.
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Hi Louis!^^
Global warming is one of the biggest problems that we are facing right now.
I totally agree with your answer because change should start from every individual.
As they say, a micro act will have a macro effect.
~~T. Andrea
What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
>> Correct
First, to reduce the dangers of global warming, we could walk in a walking distance than riding cars or we could ride bikes.
First, to reduce the dangers of global warming, we could walk in a walking distance than riding cars or we could ride bikes.
>> First, to reduce the dangers of global warming, we can just walk if it is just a walking distance or we could also ride bikes rather than using cars.
Next I will think about it.
Next I will think about it.
>> Next, I have to think about it.
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