What can be the most dreadful thing that may happen to you?
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Watching somebody dying anyone who is close to me including my cats would be the most dreadful thing may happen to me.
I don\'t want to lose anyone during my life before I die.
It doesn\'t mean that I would like to die before someone and I know that everybody won\'t live forever.
But, it would be so sad and I\'ll have to take a long time for recovering all my feelings.
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I don\'t want to lose anyone during my life before I die.
It doesn\'t mean that I would like to die before someone and I know that everybody won\'t live forever.
But, it would be so sad and I\'ll have to take a long time for recovering all my feelings.
Watching somebody dying anyone who is close to me including my cats would be the most dreadful thing may happen to me.
>> Watching somebody or even my cats die would be the most dreadful thing tat may happen to me.
I don\'t want to lose anyone during my life before I die.
>> CORRECT
It doesn\'t mean that I would like to die before someone and I know that everybody won\'t live forever.
>> It doesn\'t mean that I would like to die before someone and I know that everybody will not live forever.
But, it would be so sad and I\'ll have to take a long time for recovering all my feelings.
>> Still, it would be so sad and It\'ll take a long time for me to recover.
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