What can I do?

2010-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 BARTE

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My younger borther took an entrance exam for college like SAT. He didn't do as good as he expected and wanted to. And this was his second challenge so he seems depressed or devastated. He sometimes says that he thinks that he is unfortunate since he did his best but he didn't get the result he wated to. I told him that is not just about fortune, that is the difference of efforts or self-confidance. My friends also said that she realized there are something she can't do when she took the same test. I've been trying to think that I can do if I do my best since I've experienced many times I reached the goal when I put a lot of efforts. So, I'm confused. If there are something I can't do, I'd better not to say you can do everything you want if you work hard.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], I'm sorry to hear about that. I'm not sure what the right thing would be to say to your younger brother, but I know for sure that you can't let him give up. nothing will happen if he gets too depressed and gives up trying to get a better score. i think the best thing to do would just be supportive of him when he tries again. -RJ-   My younger borther took an entrance exam for college like SAT.  >>My younger brother took an entrance exam for college like the SAT. He didn't do as good as he expected and wanted to.  >>correct And this was his second challenge so he seems depressed or devastated.  >>correct He sometimes says that he thinks that he is unfortunate since he did his best but he didn't get the result he wated to.  >>He sometimes says that he thinks that he is unfortunate since he did his best but he didn't get the result he wanted.  I told him that is not just about fortune, that is the difference of efforts or self-confidance. >>I told him that is not just about fortune; it's the difference between efforts and self-confidence.  My friends also said that she realized there are something she can't do when she took the same test.  >>My friends also said that she realized there are somethings she can't do when she took that test.  I've been trying to think that I can do if I do my best since I've experienced many times I reached the goal when I put a lot of efforts. >>I've been trying to think that I can do anything if I do my best since I've experienced many times reaching my goal when I put a lot of effort to it. So, I'm confused.  >>correct If there are something I can't do, I'd better not to say you can do everything you want if you work hard. >>If there is something I can't do, I'd better not say you can do everything you want if you just work hard.  

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