What can poetry teach us about life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually enjoy reading a book, but I do not like reading and appreciating poetry. I think that the reason is because I faced poetry not as a literature but what I have to study. Actually, I have learned about poetry when I was in middle and high school, but during my school period, I often did not appreciate poetry, and I had to study it to get high score. Therefore, I do not have good memory of poetry and know it well.
While reading poetry, the most difficult aspect is that I do not know and interpret the hidden message of that poetry; thus, poetry is always inaccessible. Nevertheless, I also think that poetry has some good aspects. The first one is the atmosphere. Unless I do not study poetry for test, I can feel comportable while reading it. I believe that it is due to sweet, tender language used in poetry. The second one is lesson of poetry. Even though I often cannot recognize the hidden message of poetry, but I am certain that it tries to give us its lesson by using a word.
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Thank you for answering this essay. Please go over my corrections. Thank you!~Kelly^^
I usually enjoy reading a book, but I do not like reading and appreciating poetry.
>> Correct.
I think that the reason is because I faced poetry not as a literature but what I have to study.
>> I think that the reason is because I think of poetry not as a form of literature but a subject that I have to study.
Actually, I have learned about poetry when I was in middle and high school, but during my school period, I often did not appreciate poetry, and I had to study it to get high score.
>> Actually, I have learned about poetry when I was in middle and high school, but during my school period, I did not appreciate it, and I had to study it to get a high score.
Therefore, I do not have good memory of poetry and know it well.
>> Therefore, I do not have a good memory of poetry.While reading poetry, the most difficult aspect is that I do not know and interpret the hidden message of that poetry; thus, poetry is always inaccessible.
>> While reading poetry, the most difficult aspect is to understand and interpret its hidden message; thus, it is always inaccessible.
Nevertheless, I also think that poetry has some good aspects. The first one is the atmosphere.
>> Nevertheless, I also think that poetry has good aspects. The first one is the good feeling that we can get after reading it.
Unless I do not study poetry for test, I can feel comportable while reading it.
>> Unless, I do not study poetry for a test, I can feel comfortable while reading it.
I believe that it is due to sweet, tender language used in poetry.
>> I believe that it is due to the sweet, tender language they used in poetry.
The second one is lesson of poetry.
>> The second one is the lesson that we can learn from it.
Even though I often cannot recognize the hidden message of poetry, but I am certain that it tries to give us its lesson by using a word.
>> Even though I often cannot recognize the hidden message of poetry, I am certain that it tries to give us a lesson.
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