What can we do right now to slow climate change and make a real difference?

2014-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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I think every change can be started by small action. For example,We can change our society into better place by helping each other and follow the rule. it is so easy but it's meaning is not samall but big. Like this, we can do small action in our life. it is so easy for our to recycle our garbage or save electronic and water. But many people throw thier garbage and use water so many. If we use everything in our nature and pollute our environment, it's result go back to our life. I remember easter island about MOAI. This island is very beautiful and have many resource. But people use their resource to build MOAI carelessly. Evenyually, they can not live anymore in the easter island. It will be our society if we use our nature like now. we should save our resource and safe our nature from pollution.

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ You did a great job! I agree with you. We will be able to live in a nice and beautiful place if we save our nature from pollution and destrcuation. Anyway, let\'s talk about this in our class. I\'ll see you later. Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea I think every change can be started by small action. >> I think every change can start from small actions.For example,We can change our society into better place by helping each other and follow the rule. >> For example, we can change our society into a better place by helping each other and following the rules. it is so easy but it\'s meaning is not samall but big. >> It\'s easy and the meaning is not small but big. >> It\'s easy and meaningful.Like this, we can do small action in our life. >> For instance, we can do small actions in our life.it is so easy for our to recycle our garbage or save electronic and water. >> It is so easy for us to recycle our garbage, save electricity and conserve water.But many people throw thier garbage and use water so many. >> But many people throw their garbage anywhere and use plenty of water.If we use everything in our nature and pollute our environment, it\'s result go back to our life. >> If we over use everything in our nature and pollute our environment, bad results will come back to us. I remember easter island about MOAI. >> I remember the easter island about MOAI.This island is very beautiful and have many resource. >> This island is very beautiful and have many resources.But people use their resource to build MOAI carelessly. >> But people use their resources to build MOAI carelessly.Evenyually, they can not live anymore in the easter island. >> Eventually, they can\'t live there anymore. It will be our society if we use our nature like now. >> It will be our society if we use our nature in a good way. we should save our resource and safe our nature from pollution. >> We should ave our resources and nature from pollution.

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