What can we learn from animals?
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5 sentences are not enough for me. So, I will just write about my opinion on the topic.
I believe there are so many things we can learn from animal. For me, we can learn what real love is from animal, especially from my pet. I have a dog named Ruben. He is an Yorkshire terrier and It\\\'s been more than 4 years since I have raised him. And whenever I see him, I can feel his love to me. He is very cuddly and wants to be with me anytime. He is the first one to greet me when I get home after work. It\\\'s like he doesn\\\'t put any conditions of his love to me and I believe this is why we say dogs are man\\\'s best friend.
Moreover, he never judges me. He doesn\\\'t care how I am dressed and more. No matter the situation, he is always happy to see me with the same enthusiasm every time when he sees me.
He is just so precious and my happy virus.
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Hello Ms. [이름], thank you so much for answering one of your homework!
I really appreciate your effort. ^^
Too bad we can\'t talk today, I guess you are having a hectic day :(
Well, try to seize and enjoy the day. Never forget to always wear a smile to conquer a stressful day. ^^
Talk to you soon. ^^
5 sentences are not enough for me. So, I will just write about my opinion on the topic.
>> Five sentences are not enough for me to explain my opinion, so I will just freely write what I think about the topic.
I believe there are so many things we can learn from animal.
>> I believe there are so many things we can learn from animals.
For me, we can learn what real love is from animal, especially from my pet.
>> For me, we can learn what real love is from animals, especially from my pet.
I have a dog named Ruben.
>> CORRECT!
He is an Yorkshire terrier and It\'s been more than 4 years since I have raised him.
>> He is a Yorkshire Terrier and it\'s been over 4 years since I have raised him.
And whenever I see him, I can feel his love to me.
>> And whenever I see him, I can feel his love for me.
He is very cuddly and wants to be with me anytime.
>> CORRECT!
He is the first one to greet me when I get home after work.
>> He would greet me first whenever I get home from work.
It\'s like he doesn\'t put any conditions of his love to me and I believe this is why we say dogs are man\'s best friend.
>> It\'s like he doesn\'t have any conditions on loving me and I believe this is why we say \"Dogs are man\'s best friend\".
Moreover, he never judges me.
Moreover, he never judges me.
>> CORRECT!
He doesn\'t care how I am dressed and more.
>> CORRECT!
No matter the situation, he is always happy to see me with the same enthusiasm every time when he sees me.
>> No matter the situation is, he is always happy to see me with the same enthusiasm.
He is just so precious and my happy virus.
>> CORRECT!
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