What can we learn from out mistakes?
학생이 쓴 원문
Through mistakes, I will be able to learn strong mental, what I need to correct through my mistakes, and the right way.
If I make a mistake, I can get scolded by my boss or team member, which will allow me to look back on my mental and strengthen my mental. IIn addition, I will know what I did wrong and why I did wrong, and through it, I will figure out what to do to avoid making the same mistake and how to reduce or correct the mistake. Finally, I will make my own routine while thinking about that part, and I will be able to learn and make better ways that suit me.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ji [이름]. I hope you are enjoying your day off. Well done on the homework. You can organize your ideas well. Your writing is getting stronger. You use good sentence structures, but watch for small grammar mistakes and spelling. Keep up the good work! ~Teacher Jane ^_^
Through mistakes, I will be able to learn strong mental, what I need to correct through my mistakes, and the right way.
>> Through mistakes, I will be able to learn strong mental skills, what I need to correct through my mistakes, and the right way.
If I make a mistake, I can get scolded by my boss or team member, which will allow me to look back on my mental and strengthen my mental.
>> If I make a mistake, I can get scolded by my boss or team member, which will allow me to look back on my mental health and strengthen it.
IIn addition, I will know what I did wrong and why I did wrong, and through it, I will figure out what to do to avoid making the same mistake and how to reduce or correct the mistake.
>> OR: In addition, I will know what I did wrong and how it happened, so through it, I can figure out how to avoid making the same mistake and how to reduce or correct the mistake.
Finally, I will make my own routine while thinking about that part, and I will be able to learn and make better ways that suit me.
>> CORRECT
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