What can you do outside your house? please expain.

There are lots of things to do outside. For example, I can go to theater to see movies or walk down the street talking with my friends. I also like riding a bicycle and eating fried chicken with beer after i ride the bicycle near by the Han River when the whether is good. I usually go to shop with my mother when i come back to home. Now i live alone because my university is far from my parents\' house so they always buy something like clothes, food, and amenities for me. Likewise l can do a range of things outside.

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What can you do outside your house? please expain.

There are lots of things to do outside.

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or>>There are so many outside activities that can be done.

For example, I can go to theater to see movies or walk down the street talking with my friends.

>>For example, I can go to the theater to see movies or walk down the streets while talking with my friends.

I also like riding a bicycle and eating fried chicken with beer after i ride the bicycle near by the Han River when the whether is good.

>>I also like riding a bicycle near by the Han River when the weather is good and eating fried chicken with beer after a bike ride.

I usually go to shop with my mother when i come back to home.

>>I usually go shopping with my mother when I go home.

Now i live alone because my university is far from my parents\' house so they always buy something like clothes, food, and amenities for me.

>>Right now, I live alone because my university is far from my parents\' house so they always buy something like clothes, food, and other helpful things for me.

Likewise, l can do a range of things outside. 

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or>>Moreover, l can do a variety of activities outside.