What can you do prepare for a natural disaster?

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I think we should prepare essential things to make provision about natural disaster.

>> I think we should prepare essential things to make provision for a natural disaster.
Firstly, I belive that water is most important thing.

>> Firstly, I believe that water is the most important thing that we must prepare.

Our body is consisted by water more than 70%.

>> Our body is composed of more than 70% water.

So, if we don\'t have enough water in our body, we can be died, which tell us water is important.

>> So, if we don\'t have enough water in our body, we can be die, which tells/explains us why water is important.  

Therefor, I want to prepare water firstly.

>> Therefore, I want to prepare water first.
Secondly, we should prepare some clothes or blankets.

>> Correct.

Supposing our area suffered from typhoon, the house can be gone and we will feel cold.

>> Supposing our area suffered from a typhoon, our house could be washed away by flood and we would feel cold.

So, we should keep our temperature by using that.

>> So, we should keep our body temperature stable by using that.
Lastly, I think food is also important thing.

>> Lastly, I think food is also important.

The reason is that our energy come out from food, and it can keep our temperature as well.

>> The reason is that our energy comes from food, and it can keep our body temperature stable as well.
In summary, we should prepare water, clothes, blankets, and some food in the situation.

>> In summary, we should prepare water, clothes, blankets, and some food for this situation.