What can you do to be a good citizen?
학생이 쓴 원문
What should I do to be a good citizen?
Step one, that\'s what I\'m interested in.How I can be a good citizen, what I should do to make efforts.
Thinking is step two.Step 2, practice it directly.It\'s not all about thinking.I think it\'s an action. Last stage three, there are things that can and should not be done because I am still an elementary school student.Therefore, I think doing my best to the extent that I have to do is the last three steps to become a good citizen.
But many people think that results are more important, but results are not.
The fact that I did it...I think the way I thought about it is more important than the result.I want us all to do that.
Just like a class where students cooperate and discuss with each other instead of talking to teachers,
if our lives become like that, it will be a country where not everyone is a good citizen, but everyone can work together.
강사 첨삭
Hello Su A,
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you.
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
What can you do to be a good citizen?
Step one, that\'s what I\'m interested in.
>>> Step one, I should be interested in how to become a good citizen.
How I can be a good citizen, what I should do to make efforts.
>>> Ask yourself, how will I be a good citizen and what efforts should I do?
Thinking is step two.Step 2, practice it directly.It\'s not all about thinking.I think it\'s an action.
>>> Step two is thinking. But I think thinking without action is not good. Thinking without practicing it directly is useless.
Last stage three, there are things that can and should not be done because I am still an elementary school student.
>>> Last step you should know your limitations. There are things that can and should not be done because I am still an elementary school student.
Therefore, I think doing my best to the extent that I have to do is the last three steps to become a good citizen.
>>> Therefore, I think doing my best to the extent that I have is the last step in becoming a good citizen.
But many people think that results are more important, but results are not.
The fact that I did it...I think the way I thought about it is more important than the result.I want us all to do that.
The fact that I did it...I think the way I thought about it is more important than the result.I want us all to do that.
>>> But many people think that results are more important, but the results are not. The fact that I did it and my thoughts about it are the most important. I want all people to do it.
Just like a class where students cooperate and discuss with each other instead of talking to teachers,
>>> Just like a class where students cooperate and discuss with each other instead of talking to the teacher.
if our lives become like that, it will be a country where not everyone is a good citizen, but everyone can work together.
>>> If our lives become similar to that then it will be a better country where everyone is not just a good citizen, but everyone can also work together.
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