What can you do to make the world a better place?
학생이 쓴 원문
For a better world, I must be a person without prejudice. Regardless of gender or skin color, you should look at it as a person being. The world will be perfectly fine if everyone does so, starting with me.
I hope your throat gets better!
강사 첨삭
Hi Clara! Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it :) See you soon!
For a better world, I must be a person without prejudice.
>> CORRECT
Regardless of gender or skin color, you should look at it as a person being.
>> Regardless of gender or skin color, you should look at other people as human beings.
The world will be perfectly fine if everyone does so, starting with me.
>> CORRECT
I hope your throat gets better!
I hope your throat gets better!
>> THANK YOU CLARA FOR THE CONCERN <3 xx lots of love.
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