What can you do to prepare in advance for a disaster?

2019-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Disaster will happen because people don\'t take care about it. They are throwing trashes on the street, and factory throw away waste water into the sea. This can be changed in our lives. I can pick up trashes on the street. And I can use surfactant-free shampoo for our Earth. I think it can prevent disaster even it\'s not a big deal.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for doing your homework [이름]! You missed the class this morning.

See you in the next class. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Disaster will happen because people don\'t take care about it.

>> Disasters happen because people don\'t take care of the environment.

They are throwing trashes on the street, and factory throw away waste water into the sea.

>> They are throwing garbage on the street, and factories throw away waste products in the sea.

This can be changed in our lives. I c an pick up trashes on the street. And I can use surfactant-free shampoo for our Earth.

>> CORRECT

I think it can prevent disaster even it\'s not a big deal.

>> I think it can prevent the disaster from happening even it\'s not a big deal.

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