What can you do to prevent getting sick?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I have a vitamin everyday. Such like probiotics and vitamin-C.
Second, I excersice. Swimming and golf and climbing. But recently I can\'t do them.
Third, I take a medical health check-up . It is a duty in our country.
Most of all thing, it is important to be health of mental. When think positively and act , we can live healthily.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. Yes, mental and physical health should be kept together in good condition.
- T. Beth
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First, I have a vitamin everyday. Such like probiotics and vitamin-C.>>> OR: First, I take vitamins everyday such as probiotics and vitamin C..
Second, I excersice. Swimming and golf and climbing.
>>> Second, I exercise through swimming, golfing and climbing.
But recently I can\'t do them.
>>> But recently, I can\'t do them.
>>> But recently, I can\'t do them.
Third, I take a medical health check-up .
>>> correct.
It is a duty in our country.
>>> correct.
Most of all thing, it is important to be health of mental.
>>> correct.
Most of all thing, it is important to be health of mental.
>>> Most of all, it is important to be healthy mentally.
When think positively and act , we can live healthily.
>>> When we think positively and act accordingly, we can live healthily.
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