What can you do to reduce the pollution in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can try to take the public transportation.
Because cars fume out exhaust gas to pollute the air, I can reduce the pollution in my country with not taking my own car.
Second, I would not make food scraps.
It could be the trash that ruins the nature.
So, eating simply could help our environment not to be stained.
Actually I think people usually cook food more than they need.
In addition, on the process of cooking, people waste a lot of ingredient.
Let's cook simply, eat all. Lol.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
You mentioned simple ways on how you can reduce the pollution in your country but I do believe that they\'re helpful.
Well, I do hope you\'ll do those things since we are now experiencing the effect of global warming.
Anyway, see you later!
~T. Jessie~
I can try to take the public transportation.
>> Correct!
Because cars fume out exhaust gas to pollute the air, I can reduce the pollution in my country with not taking my own car.
>> Because cars fume out exhaust gas to pollute the air, I can reduce the pollution in my country by not taking my own car.
Second, I would not make food scraps.
>> Second, I would not make any food scraps.
OR>> Second, I would not leave any food scraps.
It could be the trash that ruins the nature.
>> Correct!
OR>> Trashes could also ruin the nature.
So, eating simply could help our environment not to be stained.
>> So simply eating could help our environment not to be stained.
Actually I think people usually cook food more than they need.
>> Actually I think people usually cook more food than what they needed.
In addition, on the process of cooking, people waste a lot of ingredient.
>> In addition, on the process of cooking, people waste a lot of ingredients.
Let\'s cook simply, eat all. Lol.
>> Correct!
OR>> Let\'s cook simply and let\'s eat it all.
You mentioned simple ways on how you can reduce the pollution in your country but I do believe that they\'re helpful.
Well, I do hope you\'ll do those things since we are now experiencing the effect of global warming.
Anyway, see you later!
~T. Jessie~
I can try to take the public transportation.
>> Correct!
Because cars fume out exhaust gas to pollute the air, I can reduce the pollution in my country with not taking my own car.
>> Because cars fume out exhaust gas to pollute the air, I can reduce the pollution in my country by not taking my own car.
Second, I would not make food scraps.
>> Second, I would not make any food scraps.
OR>> Second, I would not leave any food scraps.
It could be the trash that ruins the nature.
>> Correct!
OR>> Trashes could also ruin the nature.
So, eating simply could help our environment not to be stained.
>> So simply eating could help our environment not to be stained.
Actually I think people usually cook food more than they need.
>> Actually I think people usually cook more food than what they needed.
In addition, on the process of cooking, people waste a lot of ingredient.
>> In addition, on the process of cooking, people waste a lot of ingredients.
Let\'s cook simply, eat all. Lol.
>> Correct!
OR>> Let\'s cook simply and let\'s eat it all.
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