What can you find in a rural area?
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1. What can you find in a rural area?
I can find that most of people do their best of farming and some people stay at a rural house to get a rest, and It`s also my pleasure to find the beautiful scenery of a rural area.
2. What do you think about living in a rural area?
I think that`s good idea, but I don`t really like living in a rural area. That area is far from a downtown so it`s hard to get medical treatment and go shopping.
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Thank you for this Sir Hyuji!
1. What can you find in a rural area?
I can find that most of people do their best of farming and some people stay at a rural house to get a rest, and It`s also my pleasure to find the beautiful scenery of a rural area.
>>> I can find that most of people do their best at farming and some people stay in a rural house to get rest. It`s also a pleasure to find the beautiful scenery in a rural area.
2. What do you think about living in a rural area?
I think that`s good idea, but I don`t really like living in a rural area.
I can find that most of people do their best of farming and some people stay at a rural house to get a rest, and It`s also my pleasure to find the beautiful scenery of a rural area.
>>> I can find that most of people do their best at farming and some people stay in a rural house to get rest. It`s also a pleasure to find the beautiful scenery in a rural area.
2. What do you think about living in a rural area?
I think that`s good idea, but I don`t really like living in a rural area.
>>> I think that`s a good idea, but I don`t really like living in a rural area.
That area is far from a downtown so it`s hard to get medical treatment and go shopping.
>>> correct
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