What can you say about Korea\'s government?
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Current goverment requires more taxes than before and it feels like the taxes flows to the wrong direction.
One example is that president Moon is so kind to North Korea because of the re-union and to end the war, he tries to donate big money for free without any condition to North Korea which is our taxes.
Korean people don\'t understand why we should help North Korea without any advantage or agreement.
Even though they receive the money, they don\'t even think about the re-union and uses money to develop the nuclear weapons.
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One example is that president Moon is so kind to North Korea because of the re-union and to end the war, he tries to donate big money for free without any condition to North Korea which is our taxes.
Korean people don\'t understand why we should help North Korea without any advantage or agreement.
Even though they receive the money, they don\'t even think about the re-union and uses money to develop the nuclear weapons.
Current goverment requires more taxes than before and it feels like the taxes flows to the wrong direction.
>> Our current government requires more taxes than before and I think it\'s not used properly.
One example is that president Moon is so kind to North Korea because of the re-union and to end the war, he tries to donate big money for free without any condition to North Korea which is our taxes.
>> One example is that president Moon is so kind to North Korea because of the re-union and to end the war, he tries to donate big money for free without any condition to North Korea which comes from our taxes.
Korean people don\'t understand why we should help North Korea without any advantage or agreement.
>> Us, South Koreans, don\'t understand why we need to help North Korean without any conditions or agreements.
Even though they receive the money, they don\'t even think about the re-union and uses money to develop the nuclear weapons.
>> Every time they receive the donation, the do not consider reuniting with us and just uses the money to develop nuclear weapons.
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