What can you say about Korean health care system?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Most people will see a doctor when they are sick.
I also will do.
If I am coming down with a cold, I am calling in sick , example for 3 days, and just have a rest in home.
If it gets worse, I will buy drug that can be in convenience store in Korea.
If I’m got a full body ache, I will finally see a doctor.
Going there, doctor give me a prescription.
I see a pharmacist to receive my medicine right now.
And I take a medicine after having something.
I think these processes is Korean health care system.
강사 첨삭
I think Most people will see a doctor when they are sick.
>> I think most people will see a doctor when they are sick.
I also will do.
>> I also will, too.
If I am coming down with a cold, I am calling in sick , example for 3 days, and just have a rest in home.
>> If I am coming down with a cold, I will call in sick , for 3 days, and just have a rest at home.
If it gets worse, I will buy drug that can be in convenience store in Korea.
>> If it gets worse, I will buy drug that can be bought in convenience stores in Korea.
If I’m got a full body ache, I will finally see a doctor.
>> If I get a full body ache, I will finally see a doctor.
Going there, doctor give me a prescription.
>> After going there, the Doctor will give me a prescription.
I see a pharmacist to receive my medicine right now.
>> I will go to the pharmacist to receive my medicine right away.
And I take a medicine after having something.
>> And I will take the medicine.
I think these processes is Korean health care system.
>> I think this is the process for the Korean health care system.
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