What can you say about Koreans staying connected with their loved ones throughout the day even if th

2022-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I think these practice is a kind of greeting for Koreans like \"did you eat meals\". In other words, it is expression of interest to the partner. Some people, especially, women would like to confirm their partner\'s love by asking frequently through messages or phone call. I don\'t know why we have these habits, but we don\'t think it\'s weird thing. It actually depends on the generations, old generations even don\'t know how to send text messages, whereas young people prefer to use messages rather than phone calls. There is difference between men and women, women usually send more text messages than men and want to keep in touch frequently. As a men, I don\'t like spending time to send messages but it is one of the characteristics on Korean, I would admit it one of our culture.

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Good day, Sir [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I think these practice is a kind of greeting for Koreans like \"did you eat meals\". 
>> I think these practices are a kind of greeting for Koreans like \"did you eat meals\". 
OR >> I think this practice is a kind of greeting for Koreans like \"did you eat meals\". 
In other words, it is expression of interest to the partner. 
>> In other words, it is an expression of interest to their partner. 
Some people, especially, women would like to confirm their partner\'s love by asking frequently through messages or phone call. 
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t know why we have these habits, but we don\'t think it\'s weird thing. 
>> I don\'t know why we have these habits, but we don\'t think it\'s a weird thing. 
OR >> I don\'t know why we have these habits, but we don\'t think it\'s weird. 
It actually depends on the generations, old generations even don\'t know how to send text messages, whereas young people prefer to use messages rather than phone calls. 
>> CORRECT!
There is difference between men and women, women usually send more text messages than men and want to keep in touch frequently. 
>> There is a difference between men and women; women usually send more text messages than men and want to keep in touch frequently. 
As a men, I don\'t like spending time to send messages but it is one of the characteristics on Korean, I would admit it one of our culture.
>> As a man, I don\'t like spending time to send messages but it is one of the characteristics of a Korean, I would admit it is one of our culture.
OR >> As a man, I don\'t like spending time to send messages but it is one of the characteristics of Koreans, I would admit it is one of our culture.

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