What can you say about media bias? Does it exist in your country? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Media bias also exists in Korea. So, reading various newspapers is essential to raise neutral perspective. For example, The Chosun Ilbo is conservative newspaper and The Hankyoreh is progressive newspaper. Even though, they report same incidents, their viewpoints are different. The role of the media is broadcasting the exact facts to the public. The decision is not media\'s but public\'s part. But media also consists of people, and it is more likely to be affected by the bias perspective. We always notice this fact and try to read many types of newspaper. Making a diversion each other, we can prevent one\'s power becoming stronger. The media should make a diversion the government and we should make a diversion the newspaper. There is no answer which political way is the best and who is the best president for Korea because the priorities are all different from people. However, we can find optimal way judging and giving feedbacks each other. That\'s the idealistic image in democratic state.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Mary. We as consumers or readers should also be responsible for what we believe in.
Media bias also exists in Korea.
>>> correct
So, reading various newspapers is essential to raise neutral perspective.
>>> correct
For example, The Chosun Ilbo is conservative newspaper and The Hankyoreh is progressive newspaper.
>>> correct
Even though, they report same incidents, their viewpoints are different.
>>> Even though they report the same incidents, their viewpoints are different.
The role of the media is broadcasting the exact facts to the public.
>>> correct
The decision is not media\'s but public\'s part.
>>> correct
But media also consists of people, and it is more likely to be affected by the bias perspective.
>>> But media also consists of people, and it is more likely to be affected by the biased perspective.
We always notice this fact and try to read many types of newspaper.
>>> correct
>>> OR: We should always consider this fact and try to read many types of newspaper.
Making a diversion each other, we can prevent one\'s power becoming stronger.
>>> Making a diversion from each other, we can prevent one\'s power becoming stronger.
The media should make a diversion the government and we should make a diversion the newspaper.
>>> The media should make a diversion from the government and we should make a diversion from the newspaper.
There is no answer which political way is the best and who is the best president for Korea because the priorities are all different from people.
>>> There is no answer in the political way which is the best and who is the best president for Korea because the priorities are all different among all people.
However, we can find optimal way judging and giving feedbacks each other.
>>> However, we can find optimal way judging and giving feedbacks to each other.
That\'s the idealistic image in democratic state.
>>> correct
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