What can you say about peer pressure?
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I can say that it is really bad thing. Because, peer pressure is behavior that friends or people say to someone to do something. Eventhough that people don\'t want it, others say to do it. Some of the students do bad things such as smoking, stealing and drinking alcohol because of peer pressure. Peer pressure makes you become addictive to something so it makes our health not that good. So, peer pressure is really bad for you and everyone.
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Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for expressing your thoughts about peer pressure.
I hope that you will continue to have good friends that will not put you in this kind of pressure.
Always take care and see you next week. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I can say that it is really a bad thing.
Because, peer pressure is behavior that friends or people say to someone to do something.
>> It is because peer pressure is the behavior of friends or people to let someone do something.
Even though that people don\'t want it, others say to do it.
>> Even though people don\'t want it, others say to do it.
Some of the students do bad things such as smoking, stealing and drinking alcohol because of peer pressure.
>> CORRECT.
Peer pressure makes you become addictive to something so it makes our health not that good.
>> CORRECT.
So, peer pressure is really bad for you and everyone.
>> CORRECT.
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