What can you say about raising the minimum age to buy tobacco and e-cigarettes from 18 to 21?

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Smoking is very harm for everyone who is smoking or doing passive smoking.

>>Smoking is very harmful to everyone who is smoking or doing passive smoking.

So, the department of health and welfare is tried to effort to reduce rate of smoking in my country.

>>So, the Department of Health and Welfare is trying to reduce rate of smoking in my country.

 But, smoking rate of youth is increasing and it is noted by social problem.

>>CORRECT!

 However, I think that it is not related about increasing smoking rate of youth and limit of smoking age.

>>However, I think that it is not related to the increased of smoking rate of youth and limit of smoking age.

So, it is not proper method to raise the minimum age to buy tobacco and e-cigarette for solving the problem.
>>CORRECT!

 First, they are adults when they are 18 years old.

>>CORRECT!

 So, they should choose something by themselves and be responsible for their choice.

>>CORRECT!

>>So, they decide on their own and be responsible for it.

 The government don\'t have the right to prevent their choice after being adults.

>>The government doesn\'t have the right to prevent their choice after being adults.

 Also, if it is raising the minimum age to buy tobacco, it don\'t affect to reduce the rate of smoking.

>>Also, if it is raising the minimum age to buy tobacco, it doesn\'t affect to reduce the rate of smoking.

Youths can buy tobacco now illegally at present.

>>Youths can now buy tobacco illegally.  

Thus, I think it is better to make other method to reduce smoking rate.

>>CORRECT!

>>Furthermore, I think it is better to make another method to reduce smoking rate.

For example, if selling tobacco is only allowed at police station, youths is hard to buy it.

>> For example, if selling tobacco is only allowed at the police station, youths are going to have hard time buying it.