What can you say about the 6-month long lowering of fuel taxes in your country? Is this okay? Why or
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Economy experts predict inflation can come soon if we let our economy circulate as it does now. Before inflation comes and get worse the situation, we need to do something. There are fuel tax cuts among many ways to prevent it. Inflation means the purchasing power of money is reduced, so we can buy fewer goods and services during inflation. The country\'s economic situation gets worse and the government can have difficulty in operating the country. Especially oil price can have impact on every business in the country. When they reduce fuel tax, the price of every item related to oil price will remain stable. The circulation of the country\'s economy will be stable, so the country can operate smoothly. Nowadays we are facing with shortage of DEF(Diesel Exhaust Fluid) because we depend on the import of DEF a lot. Those deficiencies cause problems in the economy. Diesel trucks including fire trucks, trucks for delivery, etc., should park in the parking lots.
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Hi, [이름]! Thank you for taking the time to answer your homework. You were able to use good expressions, and you were able to make grammatically sound sentences.
- Debbie
>> This is a good sentence.
Before inflation comes and get worse the situation, we need to do something.
>> Before inflation comes and worsens the situation, we need to do something.
There are fuel tax cuts among many ways to prevent it.
>> This is a good sentence.
Inflation means the purchasing power of money is reduced, so we can buy fewer goods and services during inflation.
>> This is a good sentence.
The country\'s economic situation gets worse and the government can have difficulty in operating the country.
>> This is a good sentence.
Especially oil price can have impact on every business in the country.
>> Oil prices especially can have an impact on every business in the country.
When they reduce fuel tax, the price of every item related to oil price will remain stable.
>> When they reduce fuel tax, the price of every item related to oil price will remain stable.
The circulation of the country\'s economy will be stable, so the country can operate smoothly.
>> This is a good sentence.
Nowadays we are facing with shortage of DEF(Diesel Exhaust Fluid) because we depend on the import of DEF a lot.
>> This is a good sentence.
Those deficiencies cause problems in the economy.
>> This is a good sentence.
Diesel trucks including fire trucks, trucks for delivery, etc., should park in the parking lots.
>> Diesel trucks, including fire trucks, delivery trucks, etc., should park in the parking lots.
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