What can you say about the current solutions or preventions your government have regarding COVID-19

2020-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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We all are in fixing because of corona19 since jan. this year. It is very difficult to go out , meet friends and etc . We can receive updated news about corona19 trends throuh smartphone from government everyday . It applyed for all the people, specially all travelers. I think we can recognize the real condition of corona19 on time, so we can avoid doubt place easily.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ethan!

I\'m glad that the government is giving you constant updates about the current COVID-19 situation in your country.
I totally agree that this helps a lot. I hope that we will be able to to go to other places soon safe and sound. ^^

~Teacher Gina


We all are in fixing because of corona19 since jan. this year. 
>> We are all in a fix because of COVID-19/ corona virus  since January this year.
It is very difficult to go out , meet friends and etc .
>> CORRECT.
We can receive updated news about corona19 trends throuh smartphone from government everyday .
>> We can receive updated news about COVID-19/ corona virus from the government through our smartphone everyday.
It applyed for all the people, specially all travelers. 
>> It applies to all the people, especially all travelers.
I think we can recognize the real condition of corona19 on time, so we can avoid doubt place easily.
>> I think we can recognize the real condition of COVID-19/corona virus on time so we can avoid a doubted place easily.

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